Mock magazine cover, need opinions

31 10 2007

I’m currently working on a mock magazine cover for one of my major classes (SMAD 201) and am contemplating between two covers. I started one off them first and then saved it and worked of the copy to recreate a slightly different look. What I need to know is what looks better from a fresh eye. So tell me which is it going to be.. (click to enlarge)

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or what should be changed?

P.S. Everything’s made up on the magazine (except for David Downton, of course).

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UPDATE:

So I’ve made another “encanto” cover, only it has a softer feeling..(see below) and I’m working on an in-between of the above two pieces. Will update soon…

Any thoughts?


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30 10 2007
Kyger Bailey

I like a mix of the two, of course.

Left image likes:

Pink writing down the right side (black background)

Right image likes:

Prominent title
Larger photo of feature (David)

Still need to see some contrast in the size of fonts

Overall, pretty good. I like.

31 10 2007
ispycandy

Hello Kyger,

Thanks for your input. I agree with your likes and so I’ve been working on an in-between. Just put up completely different version too. Anyways, hope you’re feel okay.

18 06 2008
zibi

o holera, te ilustracje sa zeczywiscie rewelacyjne ….

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